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See No Morph--Hear No Morph

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See No Morph--Hear No Morph

Sunning frog don't slip
off the lilly pad you sit
to hungry fish below


Sunning frog don't slip
off the lilly pad you sit
two hungry fish below

*For Debbie's Metamorph contest....although it might not be acceptable considering I didn't actually change the form, and the morph consists only of the addition of a single letter. But, since the first one is not really haiku and the second one is....with only adding one letter(and they still sound the same)...I thought it was cool enough to enter.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:22:00 PM
    hmmm, I take it no win? It was worth a shot!!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:33:00 AM
    I love the change in the meaning from the one to another..very clever Csleb :) And andrea im curious what the painting on your face represents if you will to share : )

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:16:00 AM
    well 1st I liked the 1st one best, but after rereading them, I like the change you made better. great imagery :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 5:48:00 PM
    gosh, I had to read it twice. Didn't even notice the spelling change the first time!! Yes, this is a fun thing to try with Deb! And caleb, I want to know what the striped face signifies for you!! reminds me of a tribal warrior.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Awesome work Caleb! I really enjoy reading your Haikus! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:48:00 AM
    This is so clever! You change one letter and it changes the whole feel of the poem. Smart cookie! I see that you are back to Camo Man haha. Is that the turkey hunting uniform?

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Clever and witty, Caleb. Just the addition of one letter makes a big difference. The very best of luck to you in the contest. :)