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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:22:00 PM
    hmmm, I take it no win? It was worth a shot!!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:33:00 AM
    I love the change in the meaning from the one to another..very clever Csleb :) And andrea im curious what the painting on your face represents if you will to share : )

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:16:00 AM
    well 1st I liked the 1st one best, but after rereading them, I like the change you made better. great imagery :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 5:48:00 PM
    gosh, I had to read it twice. Didn't even notice the spelling change the first time!! Yes, this is a fun thing to try with Deb! And caleb, I want to know what the striped face signifies for you!! reminds me of a tribal warrior.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Awesome work Caleb! I really enjoy reading your Haikus! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:48:00 AM
    This is so clever! You change one letter and it changes the whole feel of the poem. Smart cookie! I see that you are back to Camo Man haha. Is that the turkey hunting uniform?

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Clever and witty, Caleb. Just the addition of one letter makes a big difference. The very best of luck to you in the contest. :)