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Tonight

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Tonight

Tonight I have ended my secret romance
I have shut the door on your lies 
"I love you"
"I care"- 
was all a fiction of my imagination.

Tonight I have decided to put an end to my endless whining and self- pity
I know who you are and what you are ALL about and it ain't ME

Tonight you have shown your true colours 
The gentle lamb yet fearless lion had all been a delusion.

Tonight I said to myself, "forget this"
Why search for something you've already have.
 
Tonight I remain determine to shake off all my inhibitions 
and just tell you how I feel...

Tonight
Tonight
Tonight

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Can feel the emotions!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:52:00 AM
    I like the alliteration in this piece, the repetative use of tonight works well, it would be better if you cut the line about "Jerk"

    Harrison-Jackson Avatar Anoush Harrison-Jackson
    Date: 4/27/2013 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment. I have taken your advice.