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abandoned

The World full of hatred
Gosh i feel naked,
The World needs more smiles
looks like it's gonna be a while,
All the abandoned kids,
just wanna open all the lids,
On why they belong ,
They listen to every song,
Why do they hate me??
How Bad could i possibly be?
Could i really be that bad?
to make them so mad!!
Missing their connection to life,
The Reason they are here,
What could they see that i couldn't,
Did i do something i Shouldnt??

Growing up not knowing

Now 23, Realising im not to blame ,
just knowing life is never gonna be the same...

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:18:00 PM
    Hello Tamara, welcome to poetry soup, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:38:00 AM
    really good and welcome to PS, glad you've joined, enjoy your write. well done, have a blessed day, Gordon

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Tamara :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:05:00 PM
    Thank you for your well written poem Tamara. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)