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Thank You!!

When I drowned into the sea  of pain.
With all the efforts gone in vain....
Money too, gone down the drain....
My back though, remained adamantly lame....


To you doctor, for treatment I came....
And life was never the same again....
Into thin air...my trouble vanished...
I recovered? …Am astonished!!


What a change in me you brought....
Backache!!- I totally forgot!
I walk, sit and stand easily....
And finally! I now sleep peacefully!


Dr Kamath!!  Oh! How do I describe you ?
One who brought me huge relief...With a capsules few?
One who cured me from severe pain ?
Or one who saved me from turning insane?


My feelings, Have no words to express....
My emotions though, are hard to suppress....
With total gratitude to you today…
A very special “Thank You”!! I want to say. 




© Rima.Anil.Naik

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  1. Date: 4/22/2009 10:39:00 PM

    Enjoyed the piece, really think you can do without the "..." as line breaks are sufficient.