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Crazy

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Crazy

Strong self-regulation plays a role as the character named tenet
She stands on a human imperfection as being unequal
The silence which tries to wriggle in a surge of life
Successfully tickled her peace, her serenity

Try to wash away all the black and white under her consciousness
Private figure imprisoned her in mirage
She opens her eyes and tear down all the walls
Stand on the insecurity she found her self in hollow... 

Drowning in a sea of fears...
The brutality of words rape her morality 
They took those pictures of her and replaced her into a limbo 
She lives unsteadily, she wished to be saved

Blindness was coming later along with the beautiful paradise but fake ...
This crisis did not stop ...
Shout through the empty space 
She began to dissolve within her nature

For the implication of silence had rotten 
Deep abyss creates her in bitter and sore....

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:36:00 AM
    Congrats Yanny on your win~A.O

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/16/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Abdul :D wishing you a wonderful day :D, hug, yanny
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Well done Yanny, I think many people will relate to your words. All are imperfect and trying to come to terms with their humanity. Many become lost within the spaces in their minds afraid to emerge from the comfort of their darkness.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/7/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so far so good. Hugs back.
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/7/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Rick :D loved to be the participant in your wonderful contest :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Yanny, I love the way you brought on the Crazy. Congratulations!!! :-) .....xox..... LINDA

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/6/2013 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Lindaa :D missing you here :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Yanny, CONGRATS <3 LUV ~*~SKAT

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/6/2013 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you S.K.A.T. :D glad to have a visit by you :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:07:00 AM
    "The brutality of words rape her mortality" - Yanny - brilliant line!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/22/2013 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mike, this is also my fave line too :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:44:00 PM
    amazing poetry Yanny, and so inspiring...

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/18/2013 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry, glad to see a comment from you today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:49:00 AM
    A powerful poem Yanny, dark shadows behind the facade .... sad. - A well written poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/17/2013 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, sometimes the sadness could drives us crazy :p thank you for your visit Anne glad to see you around :D wishing you wonderful day :) hug, yanny