Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Moon

Connie Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong - LIFETIME Premium Member Connie Marcum Wong - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Moon which was written by poet Connie Marcum Wong. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Connie Marcum Wong

Best Connie Marcum Wong Poems

+ Fav Poet

Moon

Liberating Luna

Luna is making her rounds again
Arrayed in her full circle of bright light. . .
Casting her luminous rays on bare emotions
She barges into the private sanctuary
Of the psyche with the powerful thrust
Of her surreal self and her imaginings.
She offers the promise of lunacy to lean on
While shifting the seas to her command.
Luna moves through the nuance of night quietly,
Often veiled by the shadows of passing clouds,
But her radiant silver sheen may still be seen
Through glowing mist as she enchants the sky.
If you want to feel the full ecstasy of her might
Swim or bathe naked in her light!

© 2013 April 


For Lisa Cooper Poetessdarkly's "From here to the moon and back Contest"

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:05:00 AM
    Very nice verse. I can fell the power of your words in this poem. Not sure what all contest stuff is about, this poem stands on it's own merit. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
    contest or no contest, to me no matters, i love this Connie, and i like it a lot...

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:04:00 PM
    "Say it's not moon love, tell me it's true love." That's Freddy Martin stealing from Tschaikowsky. Maybe this tune was popular before you were born. Anywho. I like the strength of your description - Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Yes I agree a delightful verse. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 8:45:00 AM
    WOW. Exceptional writing skill and imagery.

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Karen. This didn't make the list, but I sure am enjoying the lovely comments members are leaving. Mahalo, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:29:00 AM
    Hey, there Connie, just seeing this one again. Looks like neither one of us won with our moon poems!

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know, and I liked yours a lot. I think I should have entered one that was more romantic? I am happy with the nice comments, so no worries. Mahalo
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 6:36:00 PM
    Lovely idea.......that last line !! I bet you will have some company now that you've let your secret out! :) Lovely poem, and such fun!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:07:00 AM
    wow... wow... I love the introduction... Liberating Luna" This is the best exquisite piece I read before a poem begins. I love all the swimming thoughts in this poem Connie.... thanks for the nice comment... xox~ PD

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Connie, yep....been there...BUTT it was fun...no bun intended. ;)

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:15:00 PM
    connie, I love that last suggestion you gave. sure would enjoy a moonlight skinny dip!! Did I see this one before? It's very lovely.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 4:58:00 PM
    I absolutely love this poem. Outstanding and very well written. Thanks for your comment on my poem. O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. All my best, Terry.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 1:51:00 AM
    - A very well written poem .... Mystery in the moonlight ... Good luck in the contest Connie! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)