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1 Cherry blossom haiku

Michael Dom Avatar Michael Dom - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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1 Cherry blossom haiku

Sakura breathing...
along an old stone footpath
children are laughing

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 10:05:00 AM

    sakura breathing... what a great opening line! Both "zen" and "happening" all at the same time, with the children's laughter. I don't typically favorite haiku, but this was one was exceptionally good... well done!

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 5/29/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Honored Tim. Thank you.
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Hi Michael, stopping by to wish you a nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 5/12/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Linda, thanks for your wishes. I wish a good Mothers Day to you and yours too. God Bless you. :-)
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:32:00 PM

    Good one Michael!Congrats on the win.Thanks for visiting my poem pages.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Michael, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:12:00 AM

    Well done, Micheal. I knew you would score high marks with this one! David

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 6:19:00 PM

    Lovely!..I would love to walk down this path...

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Michael! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/21/2013 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Lenora, I am glad you like this haiku. I'll certainly b visiting your island to read some of your works. Thank you for visiting mine. Cheers!
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:46:00 AM

    Many congratulations Michael xx

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/21/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy.
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:25:00 PM

    this is a great haiku I am seeing here. BIG congrats to you!!

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/20/2013 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea.
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:25:00 PM

    Fave!

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/20/2013 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You honor me - sweet as!
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Congrad's Light & Love

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/20/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hooray! Ta, Debbie.
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:46:00 AM

    I can almost hear the stones echo the laughter of the children when nature exhales her colorful sighs. Very nicely done! David

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 4/20/2013 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David.