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haiku 39

in the tidal pool
small crabs walk on shining stones –
a dog barks

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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 10:24:00 PM

    This has nice imagery. I can imagine I'm standing there on the beach. Thank you for the experience. -Gary

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Nice imagery. Situation is caught nicely. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Thanks for reading and appreciating my haiku work. It means a lot coming from the master... haha! I also wanted to say that the form is called Mondo. I called the poem Mondo 1 because of that... but I suppose what's obvious to me isn't always obvious to everyone else... lol. If ever you are feeling ambitious and want to change things up, you and I could do a duet one. After all it is meant for two poets... let me know if you are ever interested!

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Always a lot of distrust between small creatures and dogs. Congrats on your awesome win! You keep the spirit of haiku alive and thriving :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in the contest. Nicely done Deb love phyl

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:41:00 PM

    I get it now Deb. Congrats for this great win.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Debbie, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 4:45:00 PM

    Congrats. Deb....Seren

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Congratulations Debbie, lovely image. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Big congrats, Debs!! Love the image.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 11:09:00 AM

    I could see this perfectly with my mind's eye! I wasn't surprised at all to see your poem at the top, Debbie. After all, you're the one who taught me how to write a proper haiku! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your grand win.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 3:37:00 PM

    This is the kind of haiku l love Deb. Big congrats on your awesome win!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:36:00 PM

    A perfect picture Debbie...congratulations

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 11:38:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie Excellent image and feelings evoked. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Congratulations for your top placement on this classic piece. Basho would approve.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:17:00 AM

    I can picture it as if I am there! :) love it! congrats!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Congrats Debbie!...and thanks for the dream

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:02:00 AM

    My dog used to do that. He used to fairly drool over the life in the rock pools. Love this haiku :-) Congrats on your 1st place win, Debbie. Love, Su

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:07:00 AM

    Wonderful Debbie, I see what you mean

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:05:00 PM

    love this,Debs - congrats on your wins. So glad you liked my haiku but I know I've a lot to learn before I'm this good

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:54:00 PM

    I think this may be my favorite so far. Crystal clear and beautiful, excellently transporting. ~Jeremy

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Your haiku are always exquisite Ma

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 2:58:00 PM

    - Excellent, Debbie ! - Have a pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:08:00 AM

    I can sure picture it!!! Nice mixture of two senses used.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Soup Mail! : )

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 12:37:00 PM

    I'm a gonna stick my feet in the sand and enjoy this one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

    love it!........if this was my dog.....he would end up with that crab grabbing his nose! (he's been bitten twice by a rattlesnake for sticking his nose into the wrong places......hmm and they say curiousity killed the cat? in our case it's the dog who's in jeapordy!

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:55:00 PM

    Very cool Debbie....