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Monoku 2

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Below is the poem entitled Monoku 2 which was written by poet Jack Jordan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Monoku 2

         she knew of longing — this dream of love, alone

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 1:41:00 PM
    interesting monoku, poignant, pulls at the heartstrings...I don't think the comment below is actual criticism, it just seems like someone being rather silly

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/23/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're probably right. In fact, I thought it was quite humorous.
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 3:22:00 PM
    This is mooooooonnnnnnnnnooooooookkkkkkkkkkkuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:26:00 PM
    why Jack, this sounds like me... :-) always a fan ~ Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/16/2013 9:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm a fan in return... Jack