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Freedom of You

I am the girl you never saw
and you were the true pointing North
of my compass
in all of those far away days I never
once looked South

I am the girl you spoke to but never heard
and you were my answer to fear
and uncertain futures
you were my reason for hope

you built for me plastic palaces
and air castles
and I made myself a garden for you
to walk through and
rest in my forest shade

but today all my roads wend southwards

I am the girl who has learned better than to love you
I am the girl with the freedom of you

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:57:00 PM

    learning is love... love the last 2 lines... PD