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The End

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The End

The end is near for you and me.
This boat is sinking into the sea.
Swallowing it up like a cat and mouse.
I will never again see my house.
The Titanic couldn’t sink, they lied.
I can no longer breathe, I tried.
And even though I tried and I tried
I’ve ran out of air, and now I’ve died.
My family will wonder where could I be?
The end is here for you and me.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Nikolas, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:31:00 PM

    i made this in memory of the titanic April 14-15

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Nikolas, a tough thought but, good poem. However, I'm stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up here by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:19:00 PM

    Nikolas, well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Hello Nicholas. Nicely written. Keep posting. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 11:32:00 PM

    i want to know what everyone thinks about it

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 11:20:00 PM

    please comment