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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 2:07:00 PM
    Welcome to the world of a champion Laura - love the development - reminds me of psalm 23 - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:02:00 AM
    So dark and weirdly know? back later to read more!....Caleb

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:59:00 PM
    nothing like a good mystery, reminds me of The Haunting. And a few others I have read/ Steven King also. nicely done Laura ;}

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:02:00 PM
    OK--I just noticed your picture. Um--the question I have is what is your connection to the other two? I am contemplating the possibilities. I like this.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:47:00 PM
    this also made me think more of Screamie... (suuuspiicioouus hah). But in anycase really cool. Even for being 5 or 6 years old. Sometimes some of our better works are our old ones. These all are really captivating and I wanna know more bout that storeee why you no tell me of it beforeee???? TEELLL MEEE knooow.... haha ANYWAY back to seriousness this is really fantastic. It has deep emotion and shades of fear that pull the reader into the heart of the piece. WE feel that emotion Always Becca

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/16/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eh, some of the text has been edited, but thanks for the input! Love yaaah ~Laura