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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Oh, I love this Laura ;} I will be on to the next, and the next ;} I started writing one called By the Sea, and really never finished. Have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Compelling! instantly intrigued - got to find out more about the 'Chosen One' - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Love it Laura, onto part 2 ;} love these

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Nevmind...gotta run. I'll read ya later gater!

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/22/2013 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You take care, and thanks for reading my friend.
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:59:00 PM
    I can tell this would be one creepy book...books are hard to start and easy to quit...on to part two.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Lots of horror images here. I haven't written anything, but wanted to stop by and experience your work.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:40:00 PM
    oooh aweseeeeem I like that last line "Unless the chosen one decides to set them free..." ;) hehe but seriously, awesomebeans. ^^ always, Becca