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hunter's cabin

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hunter's cabin

deer hunter's cabin left naked in former woods... miles_strip cleared of trees
Not sure that this qualifies as a true Haiku

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Sara, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:33:00 AM
    A forlorn scene indeed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Loved the imagery in this very well written piece

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:47:00 AM
    it looks like a haiku to me... nice imagery sara :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 2:16:00 PM
    I think it's a lovely haiku - loved picturing this

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:00:00 PM
    love this Sara ;} reminds me of the movie Fern Gully" The last rainforest, you can see it on utube, you have a great day ;} <3

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 10:28:00 AM
    I can see it ! nice writting.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 7:21:00 AM
    - Excellent haiku,Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:59:00 AM
    i love that part about naked in former woods.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Sara; this is really nice. I can just picture the Cabin with no trees around. thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:04:00 PM
    An age old tradition, now a blight. God's earth is distressed while being undressed. Thanks for stopping by Sara. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 11:11:00 PM
    a most daring write, sara... your 'ku engages the reader to look at life through the eyes of a hunter... you were missed as well.. hope to be here when time allows.. hope you are fine... huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:40:00 PM
    Sad picture for the hunters! Joyous for the deer! Happy for the writer! Rewarding for the reader!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Excellent, I could never write Haiku and so admire those that can and you certainly can. Well done on your poem I really enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:58:00 AM
    I would this say this is still a haiku. I imagine it'd be a shock to the deer hunter waking up to find his forest all but disappeared! Sad to think of that cabin left so abandoned...

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:55:00 AM
    Excellent Haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:52:00 AM
    a long wait for regrowth - lignified dreams become cellulose nightmares.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Hello Sara, amusing and entertaining imagery. always a pleasure in reading your work. always~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:25:00 PM
    This is a very awesome and masterful Haiku! I would consider it a Haiku, but knowing if this is a Haiku is not my strong field! You were quite creative with this poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece, Great Work!!