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A Soul Awakened

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Below is the poem entitled A Soul Awakened which was written by poet Abdulhafeez Oyewole. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A Soul Awakened

Back then 
No den

Right here
sound clear

Back then
No pen

Right here
Great share

Back then
Not ten

Right here
I rear

Dear zone
I own

This soul
Make roll

Rise soul
My soul.



 

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Original and lovely!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:39:00 AM
    I really liked how you used a series of footles and then ended it with "rise soul/my soul"-- a very inspiring read! Thank you for passing by my poem :)!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Good poem Abdul, Enjoyed it much. Thanks for your comment on my O'er The Battlements I do Roam.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Woooow it is good !!! - Well done A.O. - I have never written a footle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 1:07:00 PM
    nice footle Abdulafeez, well done I enjoyed these xx

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:32:00 AM
    ooo wow,, I like your footle poem... I like the back then and no den.. love the awakening of you. blessing.. And thank you very much for the note on Debbie's blog. hugs and more hugs... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Wow, this is a simple poem but really full with quality, you give a perfect simplicity through your straight forward words, enjoyed to read this refreshing write of you :) wishing you a wonderful day there and thank you for reading and commenting my stuff back then :p hug Yanny

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:39:00 AM
    I've never tried writing a footle, but I've read some pretty amazing ones on the Soup. This one is interesting, and it's strange how choppy, yet flowing it is. Back then, no pen, right here, great share << I get what you're saying there. When I first started writing it took me several months to finally start sharing my work with anyone... but it's an incredible feeling to share and let your voice be heard.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:08:00 AM
    I like this one, well done.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:02:00 PM
    these were interesting to read! It's nice to see you experimenting with the footle form!