Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 10:51:00 PM
    Wow! This poem sure left an impact. Your words are really gripping and powerful. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:20:00 PM
    You bring the scene alive here-- yup, I can imagine this unfolding, as well as the adrenaline rush-- watching matches like these can sure be riveting as well--but yeah, sometimes one can't help but feel sorry for the one losing, especially when there are cuts already and yes, that is a good motivation, of how you ended this, of turning it around with the last couple of lines...

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:52:00 AM
    So you must have won the boxing round.Your poem got me thinking of an actor Jean Claude Van Dame..a kick.boxer.Your verses sounds so can feel to be there amongst the crowd.It gives me another message though..Life is full of battles worth fighting for. btw..So that s your beautiful daughter in the avatar..She s a pretty girl..God bless

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:47:00 AM
    Somehow I missed this one! There you go again, with those cool endings of yours. I agree with Timothy - this made me think of the Roman Colosseum, especially when you used the word "barbarians." Of course, it also brings to mind boxing or UFC. AND I figured your avatar was a picture of your daughter. She looks like a hilarious girl! A kid who can be goofy usually = a happy kid, so good job haha :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 8:23:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this very much this morning. Winners are great, but a good loser don't ask for revange. If you go fishing with Jesus, I want to go to. Have a great day..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:34:00 AM
    It has that tone of something "epic" going on. I imagine a duel in the Roman Colosseum, the image is quite clear in my head. Loved the ending!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Wow! Really a good one! No problem feeling the energy and attitude here... Jack