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Difficult Trials -Part 2-

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Difficult Trials -Part 2-

Turn the wheel
*******he sea...
Push aside the misery...
The abominable agony...
Endure this hardship...with me
Fight off the tears and let us roam to sea
Don't make it hard for me
To determine the waters

We are the same kind
If you can be so KIND, let me show you your destiny -
To dwell with me in tranquility  

We will try to share our responsibilities...
Take turns and share our possibilities...

How have you been?
Sorry we have shut our ears
To your deafening cries
I'm turning the wheel for you
You're losing energy...be still - why are you so blue?

I'll shut out the feeling of anguish

You'll get what you wish

We will start anew
We will start on a fresh start
We will fulfill our dreams and make them come true
We'll brew away the sadness
I'm determined to eliminate
The distress... swallowing us like a tidal wave...
Behave, you wild childlike waters!! Behave!

Don't worry - we'll get rid of
The limited happiness
And make our heart pump with merriness
Don't be a magnet of depression stress

You'll experience a wonderful opportunity 
So you may feel  at one with
Our world full of possibilities
And eliminate those cruel, wretched words
That tore apart our responsibilities...
Our activities... our reveries... our possibilities...
That brought us back together

We'll be hiking
These somewhat difficult hardships together 

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:32:00 AM
    We do what we can for our friends and loved ones. It is very painful to watch those in distress. You have a lot of compassion and love. Those are really great qualities.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Yes, life can feel difficult ..... and unfair sometimes ... Each one of us must "find our place" in life. - Maybe restart. - Finding happiness and the meaning of life. - Take the tricky challenges. - As you say, life is fuult of challenges, grab them! - A really well written poem David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:17:00 PM
    ****Churn the sea AHHH! x((