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Innocent lives lost in the beating of life. They don't deserve this. No wonder they don't trust us or anyone. I would hate us too. The mystery is why do we do this to them? Precious little angels feel like devils under our care. When we even get close to them they put their walls up again. Their fear makes them virtually blind to things both seen and not seen by others. The only healing must come from a higher power.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Hi Shannon, you have yourself a very cute avatar, and a deep poem. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT