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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 9:59:00 AM

    This is sad... and sorry for the loss.... Congrats on your win ~A.O

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Sorry to hear about this ...Suicide always hears those that are left behind for years to come..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:11:00 AM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:54:00 PM

    Sad write but well done. congrats. Bg

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:21:00 PM

    This happened in my family to my granddaghter's husband. He had everything going for him but didn't know it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on this great tribute....

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:06:00 PM

    It is so so sad. May you find peace. Words cant help. May he rest in peace. God Bless you. Love Terry xo

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:26:00 AM

    Very emotional. Another touching piece. Hugs to you.

    Bateson Avatar Betty Bateson Date: 4/15/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 3:49:00 AM

    Very powerful, suicide is so difficult to understand. Hope your writing is helping.

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:36:00 PM

    so hard to make sense of things after a suicide. I hope you can find some peace in each day. Bless you Betty

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Words are sad, he chose to go, makes you wonder what else you could have done. I wrote similar when I first posted here, luckily he was saved. I will read your work, hope you get all the encouragement you need...Seren

    Bateson Avatar Betty Bateson Date: 4/15/2013 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind words.
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Sometime suicide is impossible to understand. My friend lost her beautiful son this way. Your line 'he chose to go away' conveys the exact truth.

    Bateson Avatar Betty Bateson Date: 4/15/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I guess some people feel there is no other way out and can't help themselves enough to ask for help. Thank you.
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 1:31:00 PM

    powerful and sad write, Betty

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:58:00 PM

    Love this heartfelt poem. Betty, your words flow with magic. Keep writing luv. Hugs, Gail