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Ocean-ku Haiku

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Ocean-ku Haiku

	
	
	
	cold Pacific night
	two moons on mirror water
	wave-whisper song







	For Ocean-ku contest

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:02:00 PM

    Jack, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/24/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you... And the same to you - congrats! Jack
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Jack....this is gorgeous congratulations

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/23/2013 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the nice compliment... Jack
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

    Lovely imagery and transmitted feeling! Don't worry overly about the 5/7/5 factual. Most of the haiku is meant to be in the readers mind between the lines ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/23/2013 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment and advice... Jack
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Thanks, Caleb! And the same to you... Jack

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Cool Jack! Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:28:00 PM

    this is just beautiful!!

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:11:00 PM

    I am very impressed Jack....nice....

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/13/2013 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! It was a wonderful experience. It's interesting to capture the moment 20+ years after the event... Jack
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:01:00 PM

    I need a jacket all of a sudden... a nice xool breeze... love the passion from the ocean. Jack, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/13/2013 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda. Enjoy your weekend... Jack
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Beautiful! i love this write!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/13/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I appreciate he comment... Jack
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Jack, this is so enchanting. I just love this to pieces. This should do very well in the contest. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/13/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! It recalls one of my all-time experiences... Jack
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Nature's mirror ... Lovely Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/13/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! I hope you're having a fine weekend... Jack