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Peacock

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Below is the poem entitled Peacock which was written by poet sima mittal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:47:00 AM
    I can see him strutting around. Betty

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:26:00 PM
    those are the right adjectives to define a peacock!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Sima.But I am afraid the syllable count is not 2/4/6/8/2.Welcome to poetrysoup.

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    Date: 4/16/2013 2:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    modern cinquains are word counts not syllable!
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:00:00 AM
    I love this beautiful portrayal of the peacock. To the amazing point and brief -- my favorite combination in a talented poet. Kathy

    mittal Avatar sima mittal
    Date: 4/15/2013 1:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Sima, this is a nice cinquain, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

    mittal Avatar sima mittal
    Date: 4/15/2013 1:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks