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as I drift

writing as I drift on the ocean's endless blue. . . my soul over flows For Heather Ober's Ocean-Ku Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:05:00 AM

    This is a beautiful haiku Andrea

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:42:00 PM

    Beautiful. Congrats for this great win.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea: I loved this one from the start. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Andrea, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 11:08:00 AM

    This is a gem - such creative and unique imagery, and that last line is golden! Congrats on your top spot in my contest :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 4:14:00 AM

    wow!!! couldn't be more perfect...

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 12:58:00 AM

    congrats Andrea. Perfect haiku perfect imagery. Lots of love.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Congrats on your grand win.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win with this romantic piece!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 2:00:00 PM

    I love it Andrea, congratulations, it is so romantic . Love Terry a 7>>> & Fave

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:06:00 PM

    This is so so refreshinh-- I imagine myself drifting at sea as well-- shucks, and I think I better drift off to sleep-- I actually feel like puking now because of my horrible headache... and the heat-- so this haiku of yours kind of helps me imagine in a better place-- I owe you email- shucks sorry-- really have to go... ctach you soon.hugs to you!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Writing as I drift , lovely Andrea....congratulations

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:04:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:59:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Such a sense of serenity! Lovely!! congrats to you once again!!! :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Congrats, Andrea...knew this was a winner.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:05:00 AM

    I love the way you used the white space :-) Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea, with this interesting haiku. Love, Su

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:05:00 AM

    Whoa Andrea, so so deep, love the word Soul, it means more then the word. Love Terry xoxoxo Congratulation . I missed putting a new poem on your last contest, i thought did. Its ok.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:58:00 PM

    beautiful :) soupmail

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Excellent haiku bears with soul rhythm. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Hey--another one in color. I love this. Thank-you!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:07:00 AM

    Nice atmospheric work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 11:05:00 PM

    Hi Andrea, I'm new to Haiku's dont know much about them but enjoyed yours. gonna try one of my own thanks for the inspiration. and Thanks for stopping by my ABC poem and leaving a welcomed comment. : )

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Yes Andrea, no explanation needed on this one, very good, very good indeed. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:43:00 PM

    No need for a bilge. Just spill it on the page. We love a message from a beautiful wise sage. :)

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:07:00 PM

    SOUPMAIL-(I commented on poem below) LOVE IT!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:08:00 AM

    Great haiku, Andrea...the two dimensions of this make it (I think, anyway) what a haiku should be.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Love how you corelated endless blue of the ocean with your heart's overflowing.Very good haiku.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:46:00 AM

    There's too much for our brains to absorb, when gazing at the ocean. Overflowing is a good description of that... another stunning haiku, you're on a roll!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:01:00 PM

    This is one of the favs i ve seen re ocean haiku..It makes the reader s soul want to linger in your thoughts which gives the feel of serene.

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