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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:53:00 PM
    favorite ~ "too elastically rubber-kneed to walk more than from the bed to the chair." weeping indeed! really enjoyed the write

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your win brilliant Debbie.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:30:00 AM
    Spot on Deb, sadly.....I thought this was a really great write. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 7:33:00 PM
    a nice win..PD

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 4:57:00 PM
    interesting take on contest, I appreciate your imagination.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Veryyyyy nice Debbie...congratulations

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:19:00 PM
    So so true Debbie very good one here! J.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:38:00 PM
    There is so much to digest in this amazing always astound me with the creative way your mind works... I keep saying are always brilliant, and under appreciated... but the brilliance blinds me in a good way! (it's not the onions that sting my eyes)

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:48:00 AM
    Hi Debbie, very well said. It's interesting how you've paralleled life to a bag of onions and reading your poem it's easy to see why life is enough to make one cry. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 2:51:00 PM
    excellent! you've made some wonderful points in this poem and i love the way you've expressed them...