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On Clouds' Garage

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On Clouds' Garage

His engine's raw horsepower screams
the peril vests this morn's adage,
the tilt on asphalt seems extreme,
his bike's tuned up on clouds' garage.

He rides upon the slopes'  domains
man's sacred deed in cold embrace,
The engine bellows on octanes,
engaging on the crags of Thrace.

The Metzelers on wet rise hold,
titanic torque and skill's finesse,
on borderlines and Thracian wold,
in Dainese, the bold egress.

The metal knee cups spark on ground,
the snow flakes melt on full face Shoei,
steep slopes resend untamed the sound,
and thousand cubic mean strings play!

The maid of Thrace, and Strymon God,
on borderlines, bestows the badge,
amid the mists archaic bode,
his bike's tuned up on clouds' garage.

And there she waits, betrothal rain,
the steel block hollers in thin air,
wet asphalt tracks - divine refrain,
as snow flakes lace the Thracian fare.
.
The maid of Thrace, and Strymon God,
on borderlines, bestows the badge,
amid the mists archaic bode,
his bike's tuned up on clouds' garage.
.
His engine's raw horsepower screams
gray skies become his morn adage,
the tilt on asphalt seems extreme,
his bike's tuned up on clouds' garage.

© 11-17-2012, G. Venetopoulos
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:18:00 PM
    Nicely done, Giorgio. Congrats on #1!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
    Congrats, Giorgio! ! Favorite old poem,, really?! :)

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:30:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, G.V

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your superb win Giorgio, this is super beautiful poem :D, enjoyed my reading this morning :D, hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:16:00 PM
    All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/12/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for bestowing the high honors of the first position on me! Thank you, also, for a beautifully conducted contest. G.