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Riddles of Mom's Affections

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Riddles of Mom's Affections

Am I just too blind?
For not seing the good intension of you?

Am I just too deaf?
For not hearing any good reason from you?

Am I just too numb?
For not sensing all the love that you shed?

I thought I just too dead to live within your world

No more words capable to solve
Enough fed by your conflicts and dramas
Understanding you cost the rest of my life
Or I cost the rest of my life to understand the love of you

We never really speak
We puzzled in our own existences 
Knowing you is like walking in the dusty haze
Knowing me is like climbing on a thousand feet of sturdy wall

Talking about us 
Talking about spot that never been fully
We lacked in our bond
But still... This is the undeniable life

From you I stand this day
Wether I should regret or be thanked
There will be no me without you
There will be no us beyond you

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  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Stunning vision of this relationship. Exceptional writing.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/14/2013 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen :D I think in the end of the stanza explained that this relationship is unbreakable after all :) glad to have a comment by you Karen :D wishing you a lovely day :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Good morning Yanny see comment below. I hope you are greeted with a spectacular day and weekend.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/12/2013 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Rick :D wishing you a spectacular one too :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:33:00 AM
    This is profound. I am sure many can relate to these sentiments. Well done Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/12/2013 11:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, at that time I just remember 1 thing from my past about I was arguing about my mom's opinion which at the end i knew she was totally right about it, more or less our relationship quite complicated but basically we are needing one each other :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:30:00 AM
    Yanny; I agree with you. This is very true.Many blessings for you this day.....Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/12/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Luci glad to see you stopped by :D wishing you a wonderful weekend :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 11:42:00 AM
    - A sad poem Yanny .... a bad mother and daughter relationship, it must feel like a wound in the heart for both of you - I hope that it is just "fantasy" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/12/2013 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agree with that Rick :D
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 4/12/2013 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Everyone behaves based on the expriances they have lived. Only through new experiences can they be changed. You have a spirit of grace so I am sure your relationship will be blessed. All require forgiveness including ourselves.
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/11/2013 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sometimes a complicated situations brings them to a bad relationship at the end
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/11/2013 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Actually, this is a common thing these days the relationship between mother and her child, sometimes we as the child never understand the way they handle us and the way they tried to make us understand what she thinks about what's the best for us, and also same from the child side which is don't understand the way their parents want the best for them