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Upon A Bed Of Petals

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Upon A Bed Of Petals

Beneath the cherry tree, a blossom quilt laid out
Inviting, calling, each petal a beckoning finger
Sun sprinkles through the leaves springs here, hear the shout
Hand in hand two lovers stand and linger.

Face to face fingers entwined, lips just start kissing
Breaths held, hearts beating, now in unison
Arms around, holding close not a heart beat missing
As down to their knees they fall as one.

The quilt of petals becomes their fantasy
Entwined as one in perfumed heaven
Wrapped in love their passions free
Hopes rising like warming leaven 

Sharing breaths one body and one mind
Fluttering petals float on the spring breeze
A love story like this you will not find
Passions unlocked as with golden keys.

One heart, one body, one mind
Together on a blanket of petals
True lovers find themselves entwined
As the perfumed petals on pale skins settle

© 11/04/2013


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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:44:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Mandy~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Mandy, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Congrats Mandy...Its a beauty!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:15:00 PM

    So warmly sensual. I love it! J

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:21:00 PM

    congrats Mandy, amazing poetry deserved winner just love this...

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:30:00 PM

    well done Mandy, Seren

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this contest with your lovely words... Samia

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Mandy, your poem reminded me of a beautiful and nostalgic romantic movie that I could watch over and over again and get reminded of what true romance is all about. Congratulations luv on your well deserved win and thank you for your entry. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:14:00 AM

    Mandy; This is so romantic. I love it. Thanks for sharing and have a beautiful day with many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:56:00 AM

    A great inviting love narrative. l will read it again and again...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/12/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ndaba, I appreciate that xx
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:55:00 AM

    A great inviting love narrative. l will read it again and again...

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:39:00 AM

    both beautiful and romantic, Mandy the last stanza is truly wonderful as is the whole poem,, and as is the mind that created this,,

    horsman Avatar harry horsman Date: 4/12/2013 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes i've often wonered about that!
    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/12/2013 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks harry, good job you don't know all that goes on in my mind lol xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 2:44:00 PM

    awww, what a lovely romantic write, Mandy. Congrats on your wins : )

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/12/2013 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hiya and thanks Jack, hope oyu are okay xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:34:00 AM

    Love entwined with spring what a glorious composition of nature! Romantic and inspiring a hymn to cupid! I am back! GG!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/11/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hello Demetrios, nice to see you back and thanks for the comment xx