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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Caleb, I am captivated by your awesome stories. Thank you for sharing... I love hippies too :)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:54:00 AM
    PS what you are writing is called PROSE POETRY so do not apologize! It could also be called a [a vignette is a short impressionistic scene that focuses on one moment or gives a trenchant impression] LOL..why can't you be my age? To me you seem no more than 25 LOL I loved throwing those long handled axes double handed! pimpkins make a BIG explosion!..and yes we should just write of bunnies and bare arses, oh oh and kittens & crotchs!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:51:00 AM
    It's quite entertaining so far... I will continue onto part 2...

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:06:00 PM
    You must have been a sight armed and in camouflage. This is a lot of fun. You are also a very productive writer with a very bright future.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Cute one got a chuckle..Glad that I found it to read this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:10:00 AM
    Caleb this is acceptable and in your case, more than acceptable, material for Soup. I would label it as "narrative" because it is precisely just that. I recall you telling me you ran into hippies. How fun.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:10:00 AM
    And gosh, if someone ever does a hippy contest here, you are all set.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Finally! I've been waiting for this hippie tale! You could be a very successful short story writer, Caleb. This is fantastic. My favourite line was "...with a quickness that is quite impressive, considering he is higher than the mountain." You gave me a good laugh with that one, so thank you!

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    Date: 4/10/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dude was fast for a not ever having a hippie run away from me, on what basis am I making that judgement?...ha
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:29:00 PM
    ON MAN!!!! Hurry up with part two! Poor sweet hippies! Naughty you! ;)Well...will have to wait to see what happens.

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    Date: 4/10/2013 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haha...the three hippies will not soon forget the crazy men of the mountain...