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Famous Couples

Adam and Eve met, for the very first time
Adam felt a flush but wasn’t sure if it was a crime
God explained to Adam that it was perfectly okay
To feel what he was feeling, as He had made him that way

Eve when she saw Adam, noticed he needed a shave
She wasn’t too impressed, she wasn’t going to rave
The garden needed attention the food store was bare
She asked God if she had too, she didn’t think it fair.

God taught Adam how to shave and helped him sew a fig leaf
The trouble is when he saw Eve; it kept lifting giving him grief
Eve refused Adam’s advances unless the lawn was cut neat
But she agreed to do her duty if he’d first let her warm her feet.

Adam and Eve came together God’s plan to fill the world had started
The couple grew close to God, until the snake had them parted
He told Eve she would be like God and know the good from bad
Eve told Adam about it and he listened to her which was sad.

The moral of this tale is when you are in a pretty garden
If a man does approach you with things that seem to harden
Remember the snake in Eden and pick up something you can use
And beat that snake so hard cos it’s not only paradise you may lose.
© 10/04/2013~GG~

Famous Couple contest : Adam and Eve

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:49:00 PM
    I believe that Adam and Eve are the number one top couple of all time lol :)congratulations on your win in the contest and thank you for comments on my win, i appreciate it greatly

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Mandy, Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:23:00 AM
    LOL Too much fun Mandy!! )) Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:47:00 PM
    OMG good one Goldie, hope you are having a nice rest, and don't beat that snake too hard! [who knows could be an s & m snake?] Congrad's on your win. Light 7 Love

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Congrats, Mandy. Excellent. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Yeah! I enjoyed this... Lovely~ A.O

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole
    Date: 4/12/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Congrats
    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole
    Date: 4/12/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thanks for the lesson... Well received~A.O
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 5:37:00 AM
    Congrats , very nicely written. I enjoyed remembering our 2 first couples. Love Terry xoxo

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Terry xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:52:00 PM
    Many congrats dear friend for this win.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    xx
    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Taherea
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Naughty, naughty. I loved it. I've got one for you, too. Check it out. I think you'll know which one.... Congratulations!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Roy I think !!! xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Lol Mandy, What a naughty write, loved it though. Congratulations in the contest. Take care, Richard

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    naughty moi never lol xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:33:00 AM
    haha congrats on your win in the contest with this witty one :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charlotte xx
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 12:33:00 AM
    hahaha. You naughty girl, you!! I enjoyed your poem top to bottom. Hilarious, Mandy. This in my book is good poetry. You should have been placed higher but no mind. Congratulations with your placement anyway. :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha than ks and I agree with you about the higher place lol, just joking but I am happy you enjoyed this one xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 11:11:00 PM
    My Dear Sister Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS(Ours) Healthy and High in the Spirit.Congratulations On YOUR Well Deserved Win in Heather Ober's Contest "Famous Couplels/Duos"The First Famous Couple.You can certainly elaborate on the Moral of the story Great Lines. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother...Harry

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there bro, and thank for you continued support will soup you later today bro xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 11:08:00 PM
    wow!!!! a very fantastic write my friend Mandy!!! like it...you make me laugh while reading this poem of yours. congratulations!!! have a blessed day to you.. (^___^) Maria

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And you too Maria love have a brilliant week and thanks xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:22:00 PM
    you out did yourself on this one. Congrats.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Rick xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Ha ha ha very clever one of my personal favorites. Congratulations.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on choosing that first pair for your entry. I loved it. Love, joyce

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joyce xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:41:00 PM
    congrats on your win with this humorous piece Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:45:00 PM
    hilarious, mandy! love your sly little references...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Ilene xx
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Congratulations Mandy...loved your Adam and Eve!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna xx
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