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Yellow Roses

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Yellow Roses

It seems such a waste Yellow roses on display In a crystal vase Not to be touched by warm skin Or rustled by waning wind
Wouldn't it be sweet Yellow roses in her hair Tickled by spring air Like an overdue reprise Petals scattered in the breeze
For Rick's "Tanka x2" contest

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Many congrats for this beautiful win dear. Sorry for the delay as I was travelling.

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:33:00 PM

    Heather, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 11:07:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 6:08:00 AM

    I remember faving this one....la rose jaune...haha. Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 4:32:00 AM

    Heather congrats a lovely poem Shadow

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:13:00 AM

    Beautiful :) Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:21:00 AM

    Well done Heather loved it ...Seren

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:05:00 PM

    I think is one I had previously faved. It was absolutely one of the best of all.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 6:41:00 PM

    Heather congratulations on your outstanding win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 6:19:00 PM

    Congrats Heather on your wonderful win xxx

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 3:08:00 PM

    congrats on your win with this lovely tanka Heather

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 5:11:00 PM

    I feel this way of longing and involvement with many other things.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:07:00 AM

    nice imagery and I like your idea of wearing the roses instead of merely admiring them in a vase :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 5:13:00 PM

    I love the vision of yellow rosebuds adding beauty to some-one's hair. Good Luck with this lovely Tanka, SuZ

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 9:29:00 AM

    Very charming picture here. A beautiful painting captured for all time I daresay.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Heather, this poem emanates a golden light. I also felt like yellow roses as I was reading it and... I do believe that's a first. Kudos. ~Jeremy

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:21:00 PM

    Very very beautiful poem...Charma

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:09:00 AM

    We both chose the yellow rose for the contest. Best wishes with this lovely entry. Thank you for my rating in your contest. Your first place winners were magnificent, some of the best I've seen on these pages. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:27:00 AM

    Beautiful, my dear! Just like you! Good luck on this contest! Rooting for ya! Hugs! BTW...awesome Avatar!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:31:00 AM

    I really like the imagery this tanka evokes. We try to capture beauty by putting in a vase or handing it up on the wall. But nothing beats what God the beauty which God intended in the beginning. Good poem!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Heather, your tankas are beautiful. and a sweet image she would be after the yellow roses on her hair. good luck in the contest..Linda

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:03:00 PM

    Nice picture, definately better than the vase.

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:48:00 PM

    A great example of valuing the simple things. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:44:00 PM

    Heather , thanks for seeing my oldie, the wise gypsy lady! I agree with Caleb here. this is awesome, so I am going to fave it too!! You did a great job with this set!!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:43:00 PM

    glad you read my gypsy lady. Now let's see this poem!!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:03:00 PM

    Heather this is absolutely wonderful...good luck, but..i don't think you need it...Donna

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Yes it is a waste and yes it would be sweet. A lovely thought and killer tankas!...Fave!...you changed the title though didn't you? I saw this earlier but had to run. It was in French earlier right?....la rose jaune?...I've got one called la guimauve flaming. Later!...vous etes une poetesse incroyable!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:03:00 PM

    Amazing...I have never seen a tanka with a rhyme scheme!...I would love to have the pleasure of seeing you with a yellow rose in your hair 'tickled by spring air'...You have topped yourself again, madame...Sky's the limit - Tim