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One Morning

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Below is the poem entitled One Morning which was written by poet Jack Jordan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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One Morning

	
	
	And one morning 
	at breakfast with her
	we started
	an unbelievable dream,
	shining and swelling 
	with a need to be intimate
	in this all too human world,
	seeking out
	that sun-like light,
	that tasty center,
	that knowing.

        And she knew
        the language of that dream,
        spoken only in tongues,
        whose long words of the heart
        washed down on me
        like the last words on earth,
        like rippling music, 
        like gentle milk.



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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:32:00 AM

    Jack Soup Mail instructions ...while reading a poem by a poet look at the poet's name click on the name then click on the coffee cup. After login Soup Mail comes up automtically. Type your message then click on the characters and validate. Give it a try. i cannot delete your poem and would not if I could because that's your decision...Just think of it this way.....Jack...You have something else to do on this Wednesday Morning...take care Judy

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/10/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank for the instructions and consideration. I really appreciate them. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:22:00 PM

    jack a lovely wanna be there sweet poem....Donna

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I guess I want to be there too; the words came easily. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Hi Jack,,, oh no you did not have to remove the haiku. It was a small surprise. I'd seen the movie titled by the same title of your poem. IT was a powerful haiku, and made a good secret for the contest... I was not offended at all by it, but others might not take well to the white-hood and the tree image. To me it was just a poem, and a secret that could disturb folks around here. he he, I'm not sensitive OR am I ~wink wink... Immediately I knew it must had been a past family secret xox~PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was a secret from me for a very long time. However, I think it was right for me to delete it. I have also asked the sponsor of the contest to delete it. I'll have to rethink my collection of secrets, and try again. Thanks again for your observation. I really appreciate it. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:26:00 PM

    I love the poem Jack, and the ending is smooth... entangled in the best way...xox~ Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Linda. I enjoyed visualizing them "talking" over breakfast. It must have been a revelation. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Very well written a lovely and sweet start to the day Jack - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you, and the same to you. Jack