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Below is the poem entitled First Love which was written by poet Balbir Singh. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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First Love

First Love

Her eyes showed me a way,
Her unique smile let my tears go away,
Her Beautiful face made me to say,
Is this Love, or what???

Started to have feeling of love,
Started to behave nicely and different,
Started to smile when there was no reason to smile,
Still, Is this Love, or what??

Tried to approach her, but felt belittled, lowly, shy,
Tried to ask her for date, but felt afraid, scared, shocked,
Tried to express my love, felt would be rejected, hurt, unheard,
Well still, Is this love, or what?

I can fix anything, why not this thing,
I can talk to any girl, why not this girl,
I can really convince anyone, why not this one,
Came before many girl, why not this girl.

Do please not tell me its just nothing,
Do tell me how to do something about this thing...Love,
Do tell me anything about this thing…Love,
Will there be rejection or appreciation??????????

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Amazing how it's different with that "one" isn't it ;) I enjoyed reading how you expressed this wanted encounter; well done.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Balbir, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Balbir :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

    Singh Avatar Balbir Singh
    Date: 4/16/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Skat, Thanks for the warm welcome. I will surely do as what you have mentioned. Really loved the way you inspired me. Thanks a lot for that. I am enjoying my stay in PoetrySoup and I think its the best in the net. Kind Regards.
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Balbir, sweet written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Singh Avatar Balbir Singh
    Date: 4/16/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Anne, Thanks for your politeness that bought happiness to me. I am really enjoying my journey of poetry. I hope you are to happy being on Poetry Soup. Kind Regards.
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:50:00 AM
    I liked your poem. Nobody wants to be rejected and I would tell her how you feel about her. You will never know how she'll react if you never tell her you love her. Props on the quality of your poem

    Singh Avatar Balbir Singh
    Date: 4/10/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Ayesha, Thanks for the motivation. Kind Regards.
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:50:00 PM
    This is very nice Balbir, the way she shadowed you away, came into my deep imagery. I'm hoping she will go and be all for the appreciation, enjoyed your poem..Linda

    Singh Avatar Balbir Singh
    Date: 4/10/2013 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your nice comment Linda, Have a nice day.