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Moving Fog

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Moving Fog

Reaching the morning daylight the fog moves It looks into the heart of the forest And finds the life force within its formed grooves And the fog emulates what seems richest The trees learn of the fog’s suffocation Reaching the morning daylight the fog moves It's in the crevices of elation Knowing the fog brings joy, and surely loves The white fog sometimes conceals the white doves That fly brilliantly within the outskirts Reaching the morning daylight the fog moves Carrying all living things that it flirts Powerful feel emits going upward The fog starts to lose its strength, it evolves Forming the rich blue sky that floats skyward Reaching the morning daylight the fog moves
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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:32:00 PM

    This is a nice poem about fog. Fog always reminds me of scary movies. There is a movie ( The Fog ) but I will not see it. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:47:00 AM

    the fog lives and breathes through your words... wonderful images !!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:50:00 AM

    I love the mood you have created here Russell.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:38:00 AM

    Beautiful Russell, very relaxing poem, very beautiful flow. Got a from me. Have a nice day. Love Terry xoxo 7>>>>

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:37:00 AM

    very descriptive of nature at its most interesting ...good one Russell mate...

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 9:59:00 PM

    You bring the fog into a living breathing thing... very nice russell

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 5:33:00 PM

    I always thought that fog was so mysterious, a life force in its own and very captivating. You visualized this masterfully in this poem Russell. I'm never disappointed in your poetry. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 3:58:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..Very interesting indeed..Thanks for stopping by..The personification of the fog was very unique..Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:41:00 AM

    I'll give a "super wow" on this write of yours my dear friend Russell on both the amazing poem with its fascinating image of the fog and the form. An excellent Quatern indeed! You're really so creative and a great poet. I hope I can try a quatern form also someday. Kudos for this stellar write! Thank you so much for sharing and the inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love and hugs, Leonora