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Haiku 35

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Haiku 35

	

	Your breasts,
	rising. 
	Mountain primrose.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:30:00 PM
    oh, my you are so good with these!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/9/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow! Thanks a bunch for the compliment. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:44:00 AM
    I'm a fan...how bout you?...haha

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/9/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You betcha, to use a familiar phrase. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:33:00 AM
    Interesting Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..I don't think that I have ever tried to get the scent of Violets but I will now that you said that ..I think that possibly they don't have much of a scent..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/9/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit by my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara