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Petals Fall

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Petals Fall

The bloom is on us now and fear does make what's fragile quake pink and gold upon the bough petals quiver, fall, and shake. So thin, the skin, some opaque blossoms unfurl and lace the ground their life passes without a sound. Cry for the petal's fall yes, mourn the death of these little things the puss ywillow enthralls the halo of seeds on wing voiceless they bloom and fall down oh see fair Spring lose its royal crown.

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  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:57:00 PM

    I do, I do, of course if they didn't fall, I'd have all dead flowers so its not in vain, lovely poem Debbie!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Oh, I so FELT this one, Sis. There was something about the word VOICELESS, that really resonated in me. I love it when I read the perfect word, the one that should be right "there." hugs... cyndi must flayh

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Debbie

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Debbie, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:16:00 AM

    Debbie....Stunning. Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Wow this was powerful. King like qualities here.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:40:00 PM

    A fine write and win...congrats

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:15:00 PM

    Congratulations Debbie!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:58:00 AM

    ha you should break it up into puss y willow, congrats Debbie xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:54:00 AM

    Debbie, when I first read this poem I was taken. This is not only deep and moving but touching to one's soul and heartstrings. Congratulations on your well deserved win and thank you for your entry. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:30:00 AM

    This a wonderful write... best wishes~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 5:32:00 AM

    What a beautiful poem. Very expressive good job. How are you doing . Love Terry xoxo 7>>>>

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations, Sounds like a Winner to me. Seriously they won't let YOU say what a Kittywillow really is. I see Everything turned out alright from the Phillipines. If YOU could have waited 24 hours I could have sent YOU some aid;been there done that.Worry Worry. Inspiring Ink from YOUR Quill. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Hi Debbie this is a beautiful poem. I like the symbols and imagery that you have created in this piece.

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 7:58:00 AM

    - Debbie, thank you for your beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:15:00 PM

    thank you my dearest angel Debbie for your nice visit... am doing great and feel so happy reading your beautiful poems...such a feast to my heart ..wish you a blessing day <3 much luv and big hugs <3

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 8:36:00 PM

    Debbie...this is a magical write! I love the way you have described the falling petals and their short life span. We mourn knowing that we too are "flowers quickly fading...here today and gone tomorrow." Lovely...the asterix comment gave me a laugh! Love your version of the plant much better! ;)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 8:28:00 PM

    Very lovely Debbie ......can see the lace hit the ground....wonderful line.....Donna

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 6:37:00 PM

    The fragrance created by your pen is heaven to experience. Great Job dearest Debbie. Hugs to ya...... Jake

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Give us a photo of it on blog my dear, Oh how beautiful this garden grows when the dreamer plants her seeds, lovely xxx

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Love it- Beautiful!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Lovely lovely!!! In spite on not being able to say (what used to be such an innocent word!!)....silly indeed, but not your poem! Lovely!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:28:00 PM

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Debbie now this is very eloquent, I like this a lot...David