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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:46:00 PM

    I think you both did a great job. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:03:00 AM

    Missed you loads David, great to see you hear again.. *hugs*

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:37:00 AM

    Sing it! Together sing it!

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:25:00 AM

    This is such a sweet collaboration, David. It's great to see you and Yasmin writing this together. Just me saying hi and hoping all is well with you and your family...they are always in my prayers.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Soulful Love ....the best kind. Really enjoyed this poem David - lovely collaboration with Yasmin....Shaz

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 6:14:00 PM

    David, today you are the highlight of my day. I needed your warm friendship feeling around my skies today. I read your soup mail the other day, and realize you are still watching over us over me.. your friend TEX, and yes I did change my name to Tex, that very day thinking of only you. You and your daughter are in my thoughts. Like everyone, I await for you to post a new poem above your poem sad poem TAKEN. you are beautiful even though your a man. Love TEX

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:02:00 PM

    How are you David? Stopping by to wish you a great new week.Hope you had a peaceful weekend my friend.Take Care..Arild

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:14:00 AM

    just beautiful Dave.You and Yasmin created a wonderful poem-Charma

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:38:00 PM

    David this is a lovely work from two of my favorite poets...

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:48:00 PM

    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS! You guys did such a killer job, well done! :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:29:00 PM

    great collaboration...flows as if from one pen. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Very touching. "Dizzying heights" is such an appropriate phrase to describe a deep love. I collaborated on a poem once with a friend and it was very difficult but I wrote something I never would have written if I had not had been inspired by a random conversation with this friend. The poem is "The Moon Only Cries"

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Hi David, Must say the pair of you have produced a great poem here. Very soulful indeed. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Hi David, haven't seen you in a while, are you ok? beautiful poem, Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Soulful indeed... lucky muse if she commands your affections to this extent. Lovely romantic verse... enjoyed xx

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:10:00 AM

    And a lovely soul it is ~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 11:42:00 PM

    Great write.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:02:00 PM

    Thank you for the hi David... xox~ TEX

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:12:00 PM

    So romantic David, the two of you have hearts in tune with each other! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 3:19:00 PM

    you write beautifully together : )

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 8:33:00 AM

    David and Yas, You two sync so well with each other, good collab:) Jag

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Rereading this one. it truly ended up a beautiful write, David.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:56:00 PM

    David,a wonderful collab With a true poetic Queen:) Passionate and brilliant in every line.Take Care my friend..Arild

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:05:00 PM

    soul mates.. beautiful collaboration. I thank you for your comment on my write Angel Wings, it brought my much needed comfort, hugs-x, Royal

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:01:00 AM

    amazing collab, truly beautiful poem David and Yasmin...

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:38:00 AM

    AWESOME COLLAB. are you both!! Two of the more Brilliant lights here on Poetry Soup!!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 7:08:00 PM

    We are blessed who find a love so true! Another great collab David.

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 3:49:00 PM

    You both should write more together....this is absolutely beautiful! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:01:00 AM

    what a beauty you two came up with xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:07:00 PM

    what a passionate love poem you two came up with. Making it look so easy to match up with one another in a collaboration. So what will ours be on, David?