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Moon

(07/04/2013)

You have an astonishing beauty
From afar you capture me with your gleam
When days get tough and dreary
I’ll gaze upon you and I know I’ll be able to dream
Those in this world but you, are all tricky
Perfection outside, but has ugly sins to redeem
Unlike sun, never can be eyes savored
Your scrumptiousness can’t be done devoured
To me you are a grand in any phases
If I was to land my humble feet on you
On your crater I’d write a praise,
Of how well you do your job to amaze 
Even when you are unsighted 
Every night, before reaching God
On you I transit my grace
As you beam your Amen to my face


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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:13:00 PM
    this is beautiful

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Hi Dinda, I truly love this poem.It is beautiful!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:44:00 AM
    beautiful

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:42:00 AM
    very beautiful tribute to the moon...nice ending too :)

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:22:00 PM
    You give the moon her rightful place; the mystery, the magic and the quieet splendor riding in a night sky. Loved your portrayal! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 1:38:00 PM
    it is like magic. I love the poem , ~*~ SKAT

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Great poem,Dinda.Very artistic and creative:) Keep that wonderful pen writing my friend! Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 7:38:00 AM
    This is a sweet moon poem, Dinda. I loved that last line: to beam an amen, that is clever!!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:04:00 PM
    lovely and deep ~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:18:00 AM
    I wonder who is this referring to, a mother, a brother? In any case this was very well written. "To me you are a grand in any phases" << I would like to be grand in the eyes someone at all times... sounds like a lucky person! Powerful writing, my friend!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:06:00 PM
    "On your crater I'd write a praise", that's just intense! A fantastic declaration!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:33:00 AM
    Nice one :) feeling of serenity is found.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:19:00 PM
    - Beautiful poem Dinda! - S-mail! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)