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MY SOUL, I SEE

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MY SOUL, I SEE

Dawn ! It breaks! A new born day
I hope there is a change in any sort of way
The sun it peaks through the puffy white clouds
As I sit and visualize - to see clearly
That my day I cherish ever so dearly
Deep in my hear - I hope I see imagery
Flattering through my brain! In my eyes
And promises I keep - I try to reach the skies
Yet indeed! Through the night I dream
And awake I see true colors of reality
That running through my soul - I gleam
With feelings towards my responsibility
A new day truly challenging it may then seem
I can never find the happiness deep inside me
It' all about you! Complicating my day
Dysfunctional  - you sure did shine
Today I challenge myself to overcome you
I see the beauty in my soul - permeates
It's deep inside - and beauteous thoughts
This in my deep set heart , still then creates
The words that come to mind - reflect
Down on my personality , it is the key
I'm breaking with the crack of dawn, a mood
You're a disadvantage in my heart
My skills I portray , my mind it may smooth
And my pen - strokes like that of the brush
As I put my mind to the test and color with hue
My art I put in words each born new day
Yet I still reach very few - must it be
That the darkness of the clouds shined down on me
As the sun peaks through, I'll cherish each thought
My mind thinks clearly and yet not distraught
I color my world with the pen, remembering when
I dreamed, I dream each born new day
And imagery, I see this in my mind today.
Words they intrigue me, pun ? Do I see?
I'm working with the sun in my eyes, with me.
We are both at our peak,  Then I speak!

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Stacey wow this is great, very enlightening ...David

    law Avatar stacey law
    Date: 4/7/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ! So glad you liked it ! Hoping you have a great night
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:56:00 AM
    A very deep and interesting poem Stacey, dreaming and speaking... good one..Linda

    law Avatar stacey law
    Date: 4/7/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda! Appreciate your interest ! Have A wonderful evening