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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 3:12:00 PM

    Is it really that bad round here..? WOW....' I shall have to be more active I must be missing out on lots..! good to read you today David, take care Joe..'

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 11:02:00 AM

    Hullo, David. Firstly, thank you kindly for your support and encouragement. It means a lot. It's good to see you visit the Soup. I know, I know....the whole Christmas 'thing'....BUT, a Merry Christmas right back to you, and more importantly, best wishes towards positive and healthy New Year!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Bravissima, David. I can but applaud you on this write. Geez, you put a lot of thinking and effort into this one. Good going, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Sooo great, dear David! Very impressive! Thanks for the pleasant reading. Wishing you the best! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:01:00 AM

    This. Is. Amazing. Into my faves it goes! Seriously, David, you are beyond creative!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Your amazing talent is apparent in this one. So many uses of poetic terms crafted into a witty wonderful read.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Brilliant and pleasant read,David.Wow,your talent as a writer shows to the fullest on this free verse.Splendid! Take care Dave,and hope everything`s well across the North Sea...Arild

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:20:00 AM

    haha...I really really love this Dave.You never cease to amaze me..going to my.favs-Charma

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:33:00 AM

    Bro, such an entertaining and clever write! Smiling widely, a great way to start my day. Hugs

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Brilliant write, David. I must have read your poem three or more times for the sheer joy of it. Good work, my friend. :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:12:00 PM

    OK.. David.. this is brilliant as always, but what a great run of poetry styles you have incorporated to make us all feel poetically uneducated !! I have to find myself a book with all the details of the different formats. Great stuff xx

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Oh my gosh..that is so creative and so funny!! Leave it to you..and all those poetry terms..well done! soupmail..xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 2:05:00 PM

    An intelligent composition David - it reminds why I'm so glad that my approach to composition is instinctive and pure - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Very clever and smoothly written David, really enjoyed reading this, would love to know what her Than-Bauk actually was lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:17:00 AM

    You had me smiling with this wonderful unique creative write using the different forms of poetry. I wonder how long it took you to come up with this gem. WOW. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this creative work..Your use of the forms of poetry and types of methods used in writing poetry was outstanding..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by with encouragement..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:14:00 AM

    David, you do things with poetry that most wouldn't even attempt. Hats off to you again!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:19:00 AM

    This is amazing David, so clever so well structured, and different..guess i like this yes i sure do...

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:27:00 PM

    David, I enjoyed this very much. Puns a plenty are indeed funny. It's great to have a chuckle or two every day. Thanks!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Oh My! You had me smiling from ear to ear, you have have one great imagination, tell me more tell more, I'm liking it, more and more, just old crazy me, dropping in to say hello, haven't been around much lately, but I did not forget sweet David, xxx

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Very interesting metaphoric approach

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Thank you David, for the hi.... hope you are well?? Tex

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Holy moly, David. Could this be any more AWESOME?! You rock! I absolutely love this. Yet again, my poet friend, you have given me a gem to add to my list of faves. Well done, have an amazing rest of the day! :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:53:00 AM

    What an entertaining and brilliant little witty story....into my favs it goes. I would love to hear you read this one and see the twinkle in your eye.

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 4/7/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yep I did enjoy writing this one...
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Wow!! This is as highly creative and imaginative as the first one! I greatly enjoyed reading it tonight giving me jumbo smile. Thanks again for sharing my dear friend David. Thanks a lot also for your precious time stopping and commenting on my latest poem. Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:15:00 AM

    That was pleasant read. Thanks for dropping by 7Up.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:56:00 AM

    What can I say, David? But you outdid yourself-- this got me snickering in the middle of the night-- read it twice and got me again...when you said you were writing a follow up, I knew it would be good, this I enjoyed as much (even more) than the first one, Wowsers, another fave! This reminded me so much of that horror/comedic story of a wedding described by Robert Fulghum in one of his books (can't remember which one, was it 'uh-oh'?) Super enjoyed this witty write, David! Thank you for this!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:56:00 AM

    Just excellent David!!You are so creative!I am fine.Little busy with other things.Thanks for your concern.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:46:00 AM

    WOW, THAY WAS AMAZING DAVID. So difficult but it felt so easy. A well deserved 7>>>> young man. Terry xo

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:25:00 AM

    WOW! You really had your thinking cap on to come up with this Poem. Thanks for sharing. God bless always. Lucilla