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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 3:12:00 PM
    Is it really that bad round here..? WOW....' I shall have to be more active I must be missing out on lots..! good to read you today David, take care Joe..'

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Hullo, David. Firstly, thank you kindly for your support and encouragement. It means a lot. It's good to see you visit the Soup. I know, I know....the whole Christmas 'thing'....BUT, a Merry Christmas right back to you, and more importantly, best wishes towards positive and healthy New Year!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Bravissima, David. I can but applaud you on this write. Geez, you put a lot of thinking and effort into this one. Good going, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:22:00 PM
    Sooo great, dear David! Very impressive! Thanks for the pleasant reading. Wishing you the best! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:01:00 AM
    This. Is. Amazing. Into my faves it goes! Seriously, David, you are beyond creative!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Your amazing talent is apparent in this one. So many uses of poetic terms crafted into a witty wonderful read.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Brilliant and pleasant read,David.Wow,your talent as a writer shows to the fullest on this free verse.Splendid! Take care Dave,and hope everything`s well across the North Sea...Arild

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
    haha...I really really love this Dave.You never cease to amaze me..going to my.favs-Charma

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:33:00 AM
    Bro, such an entertaining and clever write! Smiling widely, a great way to start my day. Hugs

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Brilliant write, David. I must have read your poem three or more times for the sheer joy of it. Good work, my friend. :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 1:12:00 PM
    OK.. David.. this is brilliant as always, but what a great run of poetry styles you have incorporated to make us all feel poetically uneducated !! I have to find myself a book with all the details of the different formats. Great stuff xx

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Oh my gosh..that is so creative and so funny!! Leave it to you..and all those poetry terms..well done! soupmail..xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 2:05:00 PM
    An intelligent composition David - it reminds why I'm so glad that my approach to composition is instinctive and pure - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Very clever and smoothly written David, really enjoyed reading this, would love to know what her Than-Bauk actually was lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:17:00 AM
    You had me smiling with this wonderful unique creative write using the different forms of poetry. I wonder how long it took you to come up with this gem. WOW. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this creative work..Your use of the forms of poetry and types of methods used in writing poetry was outstanding..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by with encouragement..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:14:00 AM
    David, you do things with poetry that most wouldn't even attempt. Hats off to you again!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:19:00 AM
    This is amazing David, so clever so well structured, and different..guess i like this yes i sure do...

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:27:00 PM
    David, I enjoyed this very much. Puns a plenty are indeed funny. It's great to have a chuckle or two every day. Thanks!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:35:00 PM
    Oh My! You had me smiling from ear to ear, you have have one great imagination, tell me more tell more, I'm liking it, more and more, just old crazy me, dropping in to say hello, haven't been around much lately, but I did not forget sweet David, xxx