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Haiku 33 B

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Haiku 33 B

	



       	Gray-dark cloud rotates;
	an elephant’s trunk dips down,
	unroofs the farmhouse.


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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:43:00 AM

    then again...she also calls unicorns...nudicorns

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Again, a much better word, I think. Lady Godiva could have used one for certain. Jack
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:42:00 AM

    Yep...lots of tornadoes here...my daughter calls them tormatoes..

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/9/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I often think children sense that there are better way to formulate words than do adults. My son had a few that I still use, as did my mother, a farm woman (tomatoes were "maters"). I don't know exactly where you live, but the first tornado possibilities for the season are tonight in Oklahoma, accompanied by ice and snow. Crazy, huh? Jack
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:54:00 PM

    what awesome imagery this creates. Love it.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/6/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. I wrote it as an extension of 33A. I probably should have published them together. Tornados are predicted for next week where I live. Scary things, they are. Jack
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 11:39:00 PM

    An outstanding haiku..Charma