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fenetre bleu

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fenetre bleu


fenêtre bleu

The sky embraced night's darkened silent shout
outside your bleu fenêtre, alone I stood,
my mind succumbed to null - and crossed to doubt
- a broken model made from balsa wood.

The foolish daughters of the gusts - (some thought!),
came to escort sky's sovereign tears - clouds shed,
you fled above; sepia contrast - and naught,
in air the photograph adheres - my wed.

And then the vastness chose to die - (my soul!)
in that same dream I kissed your palms - and craved,
soul's longitudes that sing and lie - stand tall,
deep burns this solitude's realms - engrave.

In air suspending a newspaper folds
remote's her dance, that renders winds approach
her insignificance my spirit holds,
before the window mends my blue night thoughts.

© G. V. 03-22-2013

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:30:00 AM

    congratulations on your win friend Giorgio..this is an awesome poem that deserved to win.. cheers!!!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:23:00 PM

    BIG congrats for your awesome win, Giorgio. keep the iambic pentameter coming.

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 10:11:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.Morgan

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:36:00 PM

    beautiful poem, well deserving of the first place win....congrats!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:20:00 PM

    Just beautiful! This poem deserves a first place in the contest!.... Congratulations on your win, as well. Glad to share the top spot with you!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:10:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this superb poem.

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Giorgio congratulations on your win. An excellent write my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win with this very unique poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:37:00 PM

    A well written piece! Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Congratulations .GL

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Wow...profoundly deep words! May your visits to that blue window be limited. Congrats on an awesome win and write! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win. An excellent poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:56:00 AM

    congrats on a splendid win!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 5/29/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 11:55:00 PM

    Congrats Giorgio ...Seren

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 5/29/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seren thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 10:10:00 PM

    I enjoyed...thanks

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 4/9/2013 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you too! :)