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Abstinent sorrow

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Abstinent sorrow

Ideal emptiness touches night temples;
Two invited souls - two dancers enfold;
Invoked, blackened, drawn in myst'ry circles,
Years sustain two dreams of lost past in cold.

I recite my scripts - weather's voice is sole,
Extol you to an absent audience,
The shrines remember me on timeless role,
Adventive cadence adventive cadence.

Air fingers feel your face, feverish strings;
How trembling's void's silence on splendid glow,
Coiled promise on light's tungsten burning rings,
Abstinent sorrow abstinent sorrow. 

© 02-24-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
(Surreal - Dadaism - Elegy)

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 10:21:00 PM
    the repeating words at the end really add to the poignancy of this one. SOUPMail urgent.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:02:00 AM
    - G. - Thanks ... this is a poem that I liked very much, I like the way it is written and your carefully chosen words. - Have a nice and relaxed Sunday - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/9/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise. Beautiful answer. :)