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Intrigued

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Below is the poem entitled Intrigued which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Intrigued

Surveying the empty room's avenues
Opened possibilities await guest
Built in bookshelf seems to openly intrigue
Here will place books and toys of children blessed 

Adequate space within the quiet walls
But there's an eerieness that now lingers
It could be no lights or candles that palls
But those could cast shadows and scary fingers

Maybe the cloudy sky with sun suppressed
Effects the eerie pallor of the room
Need to come once more with candle requested
And see if cobbwebs swept away with broom 

A house that could become a home ready
Which has the scent of broomstick gourd heady

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:37:00 PM
    lovely poem .....

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:20:00 PM
    "It could be no lights or candles that palls But those could cast shadows and scary fingers. I particularly liked those two lines. The poem as whole is superb.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
    It's looking good. I'll wait for you to finishe it. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 1:43:00 AM
    Excellent write. enjoyed your poem. tfs

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Enjoable words here Sara, pleased I managed to stop by, Joe..)

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:08:00 PM
    This is a brilliant and 'intriguing' write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have mastered the sonnet with this piece, what a grand poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Striking curiosity & anticipation...necessary triggers to the imagination. Keep it up! :)