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Mickey and Minnie

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Mickey and Minnie

In a bunker having his way
When a golf ball took his breath away
Got struck on the head
Minnie groaned and said
Mick is this what they call fore play



Penned April 5 2013


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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Congrats, Seren. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/16/2013 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ralph how are you? Thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Was much fun Seren, thank you for entering it and congrats!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/13/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx Craig was fun to do Seren
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Very cute.....congratulations Seren ....Donna

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/13/2013 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx Donna ..Seren
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Seren, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/11/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD ...Seren
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:19:00 AM
    Love it:) congrats on your win. Rick

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/10/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks rick, was fun to write...Seren
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:16:00 PM
    Hi and congratulations Sass, made me laugh lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/9/2013 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    good , Mandy, you ok....Seren
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Good Limerick! Congratulations on the fine win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi roy, thanks my friend...Seren
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:25:00 PM
    Congrats on your win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Abdulhafee...Seren
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:38:00 PM
    good one Seren, many congrats on your win in the contest

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/9/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Francine.. Seren
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:57:00 PM
    he he he.love this one Seren, is it for the couples contest... if so good luck....linda

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 11:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad it raised a chuckle. Nah it was for the golf one but i mssed the entry. Never mind.....Seren
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:42:00 PM
    I'm speechless to the extent I'm in serious chortle mode. Somewhere below the canopy of Poets, there has to be CCTV if purely to witness Seren in mega laughing mode in the thinking of this write. What do I say <> this is the format of the 'Limerick' to test the wit of the reader and writer. Top marks girl, cheery :) have a good weekend :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol James, yes I was laughing, am i so obvious.glad it made you chortle, actually was in the shower when i thought it up, so no cameras allowed. hahaha...Seren
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 12:59:00 PM
    Seren well done just as a limerick should be, good luck...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL it made me smile when I wrote it, its not in a contest David i missed the gate. Never mind, still decided to post it here...Seren
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:34:00 AM
    That was funny I read some real good ones this morning. Have a great day!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks but I was too late for the contest boo hoo. ...Seren
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:31:00 AM
    Ha ha, oh, that's funny Seren! This is quite the twist within your write, "fore play" ha ha! You really tickled my funny bone with this amazing poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, quite the hilarious write, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/5/2013 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thought I was being clever on the word "fore" but am too late for contest never mind...Seren