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Make Love to Me- Edited Version

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Make Love to Me- Edited Version

Make love to me with your eyes
Let me see the fire there
Devour me in a look
Undress me till I am bare

Make love to me with your voice
Wrapped in desire… say my name
The need I hear in your tone
Will ignite me into flame

Make love to me with your words
Make them drip with passion sweet
Choose every one with care
Make impossible my retreat

Make love to me with your hands
Give them freedom to explore
Let them travel where they wish
For they make me beg for more

Make love to me with your lips
Let them pull and tug at mine
A slow and rhythmic dance
As on this, our love, we dine

Make love to me with your tongue
Let it glide, tease and savor
Taste to your heart’s content
Love’s latest sweet new flavor

Make love to me with your body
Entwine your strong one 'round mine
The poetry of our motion
Has a perfect rhythm and rhyme

Make love to me with your soul
Let our thoughts have intercourse
As each fantasy bursts to life 
We climax at ecstasy’s source

Make love to me, my darling
Take from me this guarantee
What you do to me in love
My actions will far exceed.

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 5:31:00 AM
    Wow If only it was possible(:) my friend always whisper to me" harden me with your eyes... hot stuff. love it.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/5/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the post, Annie! Glad you liked it!
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 2:53:00 AM
    - With love in your eyes, deep in your soul ...... a beautiful mind and beautiful poem Eileen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/4/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, dear sweet Anne Lise. I was worried if this was too....intense, but my sweet 18 year old daughter, whose opinion really matters to me, blessed it and said I should go ahead and post it! Love...making love...is a beautiful thing and should be celebrated in the right framework! :) Thanks for your beautiful post! Hugs!