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Feather Electric -

Justin Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Feather Electric - which was written by poet Justin Bordner. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Feather Electric -

The art of thought is our lovemaking connection,
histories a ladder to hypnotic healing, corrections uninvited
to our planet of puzzling passion
where a man and a woman make maps with crayons borrowed
from the cries of curiosity's cravings,
uncaring of the unwanted,
lawless in the laps of circumstance's tracks,
Homer & Tacitus imploring their heros to hush
as we warm arteries with a potion of Poetry unknown 'till now,

a tempest of truth she is to me,
teasing with pause & prance, with virtue & volatility,
with the caution of a Queen & frivolity of airborne feathers,
I did not ask for her, nor wish her to squeeze my heart,
regardless, I am now selfish, hunting for her hints
aspiring for the apple of her knowledge,
for the seed of her permission in my pulse,
I need her to sweat for my sweetness,
my will to hide abolished in the heat she spreads in spades,
I love my poet girl,
sometimes I am sorry for it, always excited by it,
sorriness skipping like a song wandering for a world with no wastings,
believing in beauty because she breathes,
I would tell God to wait so that I may play a moment more
with my poet girl, exchange another story, build another belief,
to bring our fears one step closer to nowhere,
to walk our eyelashes one centimeter nearer to completion's tear,
having our harvest support Heaven's uppermost tier  -


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  1. Date: 6/22/2014 8:23:00 PM
    She must be soaring having read this. Such a dedication is indeed something to bring joy. Your admiration for this poetess is evident. Inspiration is a wonderful by product of admiration.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 6/23/2014 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm happy for you both, then....Of course I'll visit your older work. I find your play on words fascinating....
    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 6/23/2014 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Eileen, and Love is a wondetful byproduct of inspiration. I love my Poet Girl, and I know that she loves me. I'm honored, and its super sweet of you to revisit some of my older works of passion and devotion. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:06:00 AM
    I am honored to read artistry from such a brilliant mind.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 5/18/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is sucha beautiful and motivating thing to say Karen, thank you very much - you make me proud to be an Artist - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:05:00 PM
    almost felt like a sinner just reading the poem. the best poem i've read all week~*~SKAT

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 4/12/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sinners are motivated people Skat - God wanted to experience Itself - so now what - lets make this world make some crazy sense - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Justin a very entertaining write....David

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 4/8/2013 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Life is very entertaining David - thanks for existing - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 2:53:00 PM
    You have found your lifes partner! - Well written in a lovely poem. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 4/6/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She is a whisper in my dreams, a lightning bolt in my imagination, a pain that pays dividends Anne - I thank you for your kindness - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Hey, first of all thanks for the visits! I really appreciate it. This poem is gorgeous! "To bring our fears one step closer to nowehere," - - really liked that line there. A very thought out poem with true craving passion. Very much impressed once again, Justin... will be looking forward to more.. Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 4/6/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That line contains the essence of the message Laura; not suprised that you are attracted to that sentiment - from the word passion one can create the words, Pass - Poison - Sin - Passion - J.A.B. %