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AH, SQUEAKY,SQUEAKY SHOES

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AH, SQUEAKY,SQUEAKY SHOES

Once my leather shoes made me proud with their softness and luster,
but after eleven months of heavy usage they have lost all glamor;
even small thorns and nails can penetrate their worn-out soles;
ah, squeaky, squeaky shoes...you annoy me when steady rain falls!

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  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Your humor is witty. Enjoyed this one too, Andrew. I wrote a piece once of a boy milking a cow who squirted milk into a pair of shoes for the kittens to drink. Then his dad made him wear the shoes that spooked the cow.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Andrew, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:12:00 AM

    Nicely written. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:02:00 AM

    enjoyed your grook andrew