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ANOTHER PETRARCHAN SONNET, PICTURE PERFECT

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Below is the poem entitled ANOTHER PETRARCHAN SONNET, PICTURE PERFECT which was written by poet Dominic Amezimi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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ANOTHER PETRARCHAN SONNET, PICTURE PERFECT

softly swift, along in threes,
battalions fierce, would grind the wind.
the grandeur of glory great,
could savour each victory's fate.
arrayed in lines, for wars cut,
soldiers set in uniforms.
adorned and armed to their teeth,
with gloved up hands, booted feet.

Marching Seasons, the war times,
a great army, with more behind.
trembling earth, meek fields of war,
nature humbled, nature blurred
by armies great, who rivers dry,
and wield emblems; glorified.

Another Petrarchan Sonnet
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  1. Date: 3/20/2014 5:17:00 AM

    Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, dominic

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 3/26/2014 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thaaaannnkk you! i am humbled Dr. Ram Mehta! pls come again!
  1. Date: 3/20/2014 4:40:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Dominic ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 3/26/2014 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Anne! -oxox// Dominic
  1. Date: 3/20/2014 1:06:00 AM

    Dominic, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 3/26/2014 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lovely comment SKAT... well appreciated, much love, Dom!
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 11:01:00 PM

    Dominic, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/26/2014 9:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No Problem DOM... :)
    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 3/26/2014 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey you, thanks alot, also read some of your writes in here... you are equally impressive you know! thanks again Poet Destroyer A, and pls don't destroy me #lol
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:40:00 AM

    I like the rhythm of this one..Interesting topic that you have chosen about which to write..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 11/9/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anytime Sara, and it would have been in place for me to have thanked you first! encouraging comment!
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Nice description in you poem.

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi Date: 4/4/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i really appreciate the comment, thank you!