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MY JANE

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MY JANE

Intrepid, stronger than any man I know, An alluring mind housed in one so plain, Love took the form of a ruffled sparrow, Virtuous, glorious, my own, my Jane. Candid, precocious, unpredictable, Oh, how she provokes me, asks far too much, Ardent, true, but damned immovable, A bird I may view, yet never can touch. She has flown, as I knew that she would, There is no longer a reason to live, Where is my happiness, all that is good, Why was her pure heart unable to forgive ... I hear that voice as though reason too burned, It is her! At last, my soul has returned!
Couple: Jane Eyre and Mr. Edward Rochester

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:59:00 PM
    congrats~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 8:55:00 AM
    First, one of my favorite stories and next so much praise to you for capturing the essence so wonderfully in just 14 lines! Well deserved win Cyndi but I'm not surprised!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Oh one of my fav's too, I loved all the sisters books. [thanks so much for checking on me the other day]Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Congrats, Cyndi. Well done. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Many congrats dear friend for this win.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Well now that I read the other reviews, I realize it was Edward speaking, not Tarzan. Guess I need some more reading. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Big congrats to you Cyndi on this great win.... What an awesome poem! Well penned!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Dear Cyndi, Congratulations on a Divine Win in Heather Ober's contest "Famous Couples/Duos" As soon as I saw the Title "Jane",I knew it was about Jane Eyre and Mr Edward Rochester. I remember being ridiculed in High School for being the only guy to feel the True story. Now again I feel that Wonderous Feeling of True LOVE.Riveting Write.Into my Favorites.Not because of the Win but because of the Feelings YOU sent to my Heart.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Congrats Cyndi on an awesome win.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Jane Austen stories were always my favorites. So romantic. Great poem about her. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win..Donna

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:25:00 PM
    This endearing poem captures the heart! Congratulations, Cyndi.....what a great choice for the contest....so lovely!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Many congratulations Cyndi xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Cyndi, you chose to write about my favourite fictional couple! As usual, you blew me away with this gorgeous sonnet. I just love that you used the sort of old-fashioned language that would have appeared in a novel like Jane Eyre. Congrats on your win in my contest!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Cyndi you chose one of the classics and did them justice, very poetic....David

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning. Why aren't there more comments on this? 'Tis a disservice for those who miss out on this one...

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    Date: 4/2/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My exact thought!