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Right from the start;
You stole my heart!
I take your face in my hands;
We keep on talking, making our plans!
You look me straight in the eye,
my knees goes weak, I wanna die!
I'm sure I've died and gone to heaven;
my lucky number is number eleven.
Two straight numbers standing close;
Love is all I want, I want my dose!
You're bright eyes always give me a clue;
of everything you want to do.
I want to shout it from the rooftop;
My life really wasn't a flop!
You took my hand,
Ah, I'm feeling so grand!
Your loving and kissing;
my life I've been missing!
I love you with all my heart,
You really are very smart!
You make me feel so totally alive,
My heart took a good big dive!
I'm dreaming of our loving together,
our limbs to be entwined forever!