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SPACES

The music
                  played
a satie
          piano piece
in each 
               space              
I
    day dreamed
                          I
                          am
a child again
              on a swing
push
          pause
                as I swing
push
         pause
                 as I swing
back
            and 
                    forth
push
             then
                      pause
a
        reverie
                      of
                      thoughts
higher
           higher
                     back
                     and
                    forth
push
           and pause
the
        music
                  plays
I stay 
        in 
              yesterdays
Hear me read my free 
verse 
 A LABOUR OF LOVE @ 
http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-j
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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Enjoyed this nostalgic journey Brian, I was looking down old contest entries and saw you gave me a 1st place in one of yours. I thought i'd taken a 4th or so.. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you if i have not already.. Joe..)

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Oh wow!! I love this one, Brian!! I felt myself swinging to the music...back and forth. You are so gifted with your forms....not to mention your beautiful poetry! Happy Easter, by the way!! And good luck with your "Labour of Love"...(I have been back to listen more than once! Each time I get more and more out of it) :)